tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17813352.post1125354018766619308..comments2023-10-11T03:32:43.592-06:00Comments on Fencing With the Fog: The Eyes of a CloserMaryAn Batchellorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02465966881051431143noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17813352.post-34939170535903370792009-03-07T14:44:00.000-06:002009-03-07T14:44:00.000-06:00Grats for the insight.Grats for the insight.MaryAn Batchellorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02465966881051431143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17813352.post-11335341741359006802009-03-07T14:31:00.000-06:002009-03-07T14:31:00.000-06:00I suppose that if the Nicholl entries dwindled to ...I suppose that if the Nicholl entries dwindled to let's say 50, it would make the odds better for something. However, if every script in the competition absolutely sucks, it doesn't matter how low the odds are. Sure, if you're the only entry you win, but you really only get your name in the list of "winners", and you get the money...which really isn't enough to help you along, believe me my Nicholl winning friends are not rolling in it, and only one has been greenlighted so far, but for three scripts. If your script sucks and you win, Hollywood will somehow know it sucks and it ain't gon' get made. I mean I had a script get to some guy at Blue Circle (or feck, is it Gold Circle? Who cares they make shite movies), and I thought 'oh blimey, this is great, because I don't have to "win" anything to get it there' (I just had to meet a woman in a health club), but it didn't get made or even read past the first page (I don't know for certain, but having read it subsequently, I would have struggled to the third sentence and tossed it in the gasburner). So, this was a script that was hand delivered over lunch (I was there too) with a mutual friend's "blessing" and it either got laughed at or pissed on. So, even the aforementioned craphole company has enough sense to see that it was written by a complete moron. And finally two years later I had gained enough sense and depravity to do my own thing and sell some scripts, sans a "competition". And another thing, maybe you won in the meantime, since you wrote this, but a very high percentage of screenwriters actually live in LA. Of the three that I know who've won the Nicholl, only one lives in LA and guess how many of those have even an inkling of a career...tada...ONE (and it's two years since she has had any meetings, and four years since a script sale, one option in that time). It's a sad fact of screenwriting.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17813352.post-32055272614337925352007-01-09T20:58:00.000-06:002007-01-09T20:58:00.000-06:00I'm such a doofus. The Wolf wasn't a closer. He ...I'm such a doofus. The Wolf wasn't a closer. He was a CLEANER!<br /><br />I'm going to retreat to my cave.Adam Renfrohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13151069285219485517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17813352.post-31383247323737064152007-01-08T19:19:00.000-06:002007-01-08T19:19:00.000-06:00Now you got a corpse in a car, minus a head, in a ...Now you got a corpse in a car, minus a head, in a garage. Take me to it.<br /><br />The Wolf<br /><br /><br />(after Unk's comment, I didn't have anything to say except a light, smart@$$ comment. I'm following Unk's advice as well!)Adam Renfrohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13151069285219485517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17813352.post-47964210974252779702007-01-08T15:59:00.000-06:002007-01-08T15:59:00.000-06:00MaryAn,
It sounds like what he's saying is that y...MaryAn,<br /><br />It sounds like what he's saying is that your characters aren't larger than life... They have no reason for being. They aren't good at anything in particular. Are they quintessential characters? What makes them that way?<br /><br />Same goes with the scenes... What's the point of each scene? Is it ABSOLUTELY CLEAR? Are there actions and dialogue that could make them less ambiguous?<br /><br />Is there ENOUGH drama, conflict, and tension in each scene?<br /><br />When a character gets what he or she wants too easily in a scene, there's almost no reason to read any further... No reason for either character to be in the scene.<br /><br />Do your characters HAVE A PLAN? Is it clear to us? Have you made sure that at least by Act 2, your characters are working their plan?<br /><br />Or... Are they just reacting?<br /><br />One of the things I like to point out to screenwriters are characters with 3 goals.<br /><br />THREE? What the heck am I talkin' about?<br /><br />1) The OUTER goal: That tangible thing that your Protagonist desparately wants to achieve.<br /><br />2) The INNER goal: The transformational character arc that your Protagonist goes through and achieves by the end of the story.<br /><br />3) The LIFE goal: Where does your Protagonist see him or herself in 10 years? 20 years? 50 years?<br /><br />The transformational arc (character arc) within your story should be one of the hundreds of stepping stones leading toward the LIFE GOAL.<br /><br />Ah... The LIFE GOAL?<br /><br />You betchya. Are your character's LIFE GOALS clear to us by the end of the script?<br /><br />Life goals are damn near invisible but to give your characters texture and dimension, give them authentic life goals that the outer and inner goals will ultimately lead them too.<br /><br />In other words, when the screenplay is over -- IT AIN'T OVER. We should be able to walk away and completely understand what your Protagonist and other main characters are headed AFTER we close the script.<br /><br />UnkAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17813352.post-11571185606676609052007-01-08T13:18:00.000-06:002007-01-08T13:18:00.000-06:00One heard a good writing tip once -and one which o...One heard a good writing tip once -and one which one intends to use - When writing dialogue, take away the character names and if the dialogue of each character is not distinctive to that character and sounds like it can be spoken by any other character, then it's time to rewrite! Sorry no puns today, quite a sensible point this time!Auntie Margahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17114312186821238460noreply@blogger.com